Friday, September 26, 2008

Replica

I watched
helplessly,
something
penetrating deep
into my body

It sucked all the
gore. I cried in pain
After a while
it sent the gore
back into the vein

I was told
it would make me
feel better
But
With blood
absorbed and imbued
I probe it bitter

A REPLICA of a
creation of
the Almighty's
And they call
it,
A dialysis

3 comments:

RiverSoul said...

How very well described. . . .
Is a dialysis really that painful?
I'm feeling so sorry for the poor souls who's kidneys have given up on them.
:(

mahesh kamath said...

well said...
but oh... juz can't imagine how awful pain it could be...

good job, keep posting... :)

rahul aggarwal said...

just wannit to say one word after eading this masterpiece : "WOOW"