Monday, September 1, 2008

Pony tail


Ages since
i felt your
the gentle kiss
and the
passionate stroke,
it was a bliss

Now,
you are here
I am feeling
at ease
Savoring your subtle
touch
as and when
I please

I was longing
for this
very moment
You had gone
far, leaving me
to lament

you turned into
a plat and moved
down, leaving
just a trail

doing so,
you had always
made me wail!

Thus said my neck
to the pony tail!

5 comments:

RiverSoul said...

Nice one, Nandhini really worth my wait.
:)

pavan kunch said...

nice lines

mahesh kamath said...

as usuall... good :)
but this time it was simple too...
good work yaar... keep writing...

Rajesh said...

Ha...haa...nice one..

dropped in frm riversoul's.. was a nice read..

flyingstars said...

lovely lines...simple yet so beautifully crafted words....very nice!