Two similar parts
passionately bounded
into one
Ruining away
the probability
of a son!
It was HE
who made this
happen
thereby
her sin
was none!
A mere
acquaintance!
Change of one
chromosome seldom
makes much difference
Stop female infanticide!
N.B. Females have XX chromosomes i.e. 2 similar parts and males have XY chromosomes i.e. 2 dissimilar parts.
Let us be water
6 years ago
12 comments:
very nice nan...
liked the 2nd verse...
agree with u also..!
Very nice work.
Accentuates the evilness of female infanticide.
a very obvious fact...
but still not thought...
that's our country's fate...
when'll our masses change this state?
good thought yaar...
keep writing...
happy friendship day nan...
wonderful!
liked the way you presented it...
it was deep too..
me have a "justsketch"
do read..
Change of one
chromosome seldom
makes much difference <---- this is sheer brilliance!!!
Ruining away
the probability
of a son! <---- this part i really liked the tone that gets the flow
You just made the embryonic death sound a little more bearable to the common man's ears. Wonderfully depicted everywhere. I'm glad to have read your poem nan !!!!!!!!
:)
P.S : This is another kind of sin that is at par with the child molestation issue. All these deranged son of a hairless ape should be skull fucked with a car's radiator !!!! :X
Hello Nan :)
Although I have been reading you a lot, this is my first time on your Blog! I loved your poem! You got your message through crystal clear with a short but powerful piece of writing. Applause!
Love your Blog :)
Ashrita
P.S. Nice idea of execution given by Rag there :P LOL
Thanq Rag for the valuable feedback ;)
And yeah the punishment is a rarity in itself :P
U feel exactly the same amount (perhaps more) of hatred I feel for those ************* :D (censored)
Thanq Ashrita :)
Welcome to my world :)
Hey nan..
Its fr the first time i have cum across your blog..
This poem is sheer brilliance..
It is sch a clear fact that a woman can never be held responsible fr the birth of a male or a female..
Still she is being called with ugly names..ill-treated..
Its shameful..
Ur deliverd the msg in sch a simple yet effective manner
Kudos..
Will surely keep a track here now onwards..
*hug*
simple and clear message !! kudos !
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