Thursday, August 21, 2008

Absolute

Pearls of salted
water drenching
my body
I repent

A chill striking
my spine at the
same instant
I relish

A heart
repenting the
heedless
action

and a mind
savoring the
hidden
fruition

Ah! Leading to
an Absolution!

4 comments:

Vinay said...

beau-ti-ful...!! :)
welcome back to blogging nan...!! its been a while since u posted right?!!

flyingstars said...

lovely words...you have crafted it beautifully, full of depth in them...wonderful!

RiverSoul said...

Everytime i come here,
Your blog beckons me near
I hold it so dear
Coz it makes me cheer.
:)
Wonderful. Once again, your words deliver the feeling that very few could manage
:)

Comfortably Numb said...

Absolution....Hmm...

I really like the post..but I just feel that if the word "water" could have been replaced by something creative :) But then thats a personal opinion.

Cheers!