His ghostly eyes
denying solace
Sucking life out
in a slow pace
Teeth of betrayal
piercing my pelt
Despite the tremors
pleading, i knelt
No heads tilt
No blood spilt
Yet
I savored in silence
The vampire kiss
Let us be water
6 years ago
8 comments:
just beautiful!
bayangaranga undhi BBB...
No heads tilt
No blood spilt
Yet
I savored in silence
The vampire kiss
More like a movie trailer..:))
Loved the way the write meanders..
Would like to make a explication here..(If I may!)
The vampire kiss
Liked the contextual switching in the word play here..
usually one would associate a vampire with "vampirism" and his decadents..but..
Loved the way you've put it..Yes, a Kiss it would be if its filled with Love..
beautiful..:)
i'll agree with winnie...
that was beautiful...!!
nice lines
Depicts betrayal very well.
Scary but so brilliant.
:)
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