Thursday, July 3, 2008

Bloody betrayal

His ghostly eyes
denying solace
Sucking life out
in a slow pace

Teeth of betrayal
piercing my pelt
Despite the tremors
pleading, i knelt

No heads tilt
No blood spilt
Yet
I savored in silence
The vampire kiss

8 comments:

Winnie the poohi said...

just beautiful!

Babu said...

bayangaranga undhi BBB...

!nversed Poignancy! said...

No heads tilt
No blood spilt
Yet
I savored in silence
The vampire kiss


More like a movie trailer..:))
Loved the way the write meanders..

Would like to make a explication here..(If I may!)
The vampire kiss
Liked the contextual switching in the word play here..
usually one would associate a vampire with "vampirism" and his decadents..but..
Loved the way you've put it..Yes, a Kiss it would be if its filled with Love..
beautiful..:)

Vinay said...

i'll agree with winnie...
that was beautiful...!!

pavan kunch said...

nice lines

RiverSoul said...

Depicts betrayal very well.
Scary but so brilliant.
:)
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Madurai citizen said...

vilakka uraiyum serththu kodukkavum

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