This nite am standing alone,
That very thing haunting me
God its not gone
Please listen to my plea
I cant bare
The droplets washing my torso
Feeling the clouds stare
And as if bound by a lasso
But little did I know
That when the lightning glowed
All the sins in a row
Had begun to flow
Off my mind
Off my body
Away they flow
There goes even my ego!!
5 comments:
heyyy nandhiniiiiiiiiii nice poemmmmmm....chaalaa baavundhiiiiiiii..... meaningfullll poemmmmmmmm .... !!!!
It really didn't look like a first time attempt...
A gud way to start blogging with a fine and neat style.It was really an emotional outburst i suppose. Some of the lines in the poem were really very gud !!! I liked it.Keep blogging Nandhini...
Good day !
hey nanditha that was really wesome peice of work some of the lines have been touching in it
wonderful ... really good poems ... loved reading them ... keep blogging :)
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