Scorching heat of the sun
Paralyzing me like a stun gun
The very thought of a cool drink
Will vanish when I see her blink
And in the spring when I fight
With my brother for a kite
My heart will sink on seeing
Her longing to have a wing
A pink jerkin this season?
No, that had no reason
Since the biting winter chill in the morning
Told me she was even devoid of proper clothing
All that I could give her
Were a can of drink, a kite and a sweater
And when asked what the new year day meant to her
“A day with 3 meals” was her answer
4 comments:
hmmmmmmmm nice poem
emi anukoku......ee poem lo english naku nachaledhu :(
oka pani cheyyii don't mind...konni sentenses lo meaning ful ","kamma pettu....so it looks nice :)
and over all the poem was kewl and nice......just konni sentenses correct ga frame avvaledhu..........
ayyi tell me emi ayyindhi neku..ne level of skill tagginatu ani pinchindhi..........
any ways u rock and nice pic attached...........cool poem darlinggggggg
as i used to say before,
the strength of ye poems is that you empathize roles...
very much similar is this,
here you've tried to show how far things lie between us and a good portion of human
kind, who barely earn a full stomach meal a day...
Indeed life'z a blessing for us...
but seldom do we realize that....
Good work da... hats off to you...
Keep working....
One more thing... you have a good taste for choosing pictures...
that one suits very much... ah one doubt... how do you start with? first selecting pic and then composing the poem or the other way round?
All the best buddy!
nandy
ur my lioness yaar
i have breeded u [:P] to a very gud poet
where is the treat
kiddding
super ree how can u do this?
ravindranath tagore alias nandy alias lohith's friend
hey nandhini,
lyrics were excellent....n try 2 make some more better yaaar...
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