Sunday, November 4, 2007

AMAZE ON !


We learnt from the epics
The essence of Friendship
The Mahabharata depicts
The strength of its grip!

But the days have gone
And the nation is torn!

Centuries before
The Egyptian pharaoh
We lived galore
At the Mohanjodaro

But now we are ruined
'Fashion' is the new term coined

World believes
Changes have degraded the amazon
But what this leaves
Is that we have a billion more to amaze on!!!!

7 comments:

neethu said...

"'Fashion' is the new term coined'"

naku eee sentence baga nachindhi yar......hey its nice....if u don't mind i'm copying some of the phrase for my blog.......emi anukoku.........
its nice......hmmmmm naku 2 ways ga argam ayyindhi abt tat 2 and last phrase........
i mean hmmmm mari deep sense tho alo chistee koncham diffrent ga vundhi but sexy.......
nice baga rasavu....entha time pattindhi aaa framing of sentenses and lol

but amazing yar pic kuda bagundhi
na deggara oka pic vundhi pedathava??

neethu said...

World believes
Changes have degraded the amazon
But what this leaves
Is that we have a billion more to amaze on!!!!

idhi ne vudesam lo meaning cheppava plezzzz..........
i mean naku over thinking evvava ayyindhi so edo annukuna ne thoughts lo meaning entoo cheppu plezzzzzzzzzz

rahul said...

hey nandhitha naku e poem chala baga nachindi u have written a wonderful peom with a good human touch wat all u have said is lovely and inka dantlo enti ante ur thoughts are amazing really loved this work of urs keep posting such wonderful useful peoms whioch can change people

Babu said...

I really won sit in a place 2 read, im vry lazy 2 read anythng,
often i 1ly use 2 hear than read'g,

bt ur poems makes me
sit... read... n think...

ur formation of words n phrases r diffrnt
&
I wud lik 2 cal diz as

"OUT OF BOX"
(Ur thoughts)


But what this leaves
Is that we have a billion more to amaze on!!!!

S, sure people who r gonna read diz ll "amaze on" ur talent...

Anonymous said...

nandu...kevvv kathi keka....masth undi.......evaranna baaledante naatho cheppu[;)]......nishu

mahesh said...

Your poems are very nice with rythemic words......

SandO said...

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