Standing by the
side of the road
I was awe struck
at the way you rode
Handling the throttle,
break and lights
with indomitable
elegance and might
Wondering at the
skills you stage
My routine has
seldom changed
But yoou pass me by
considering me a menace
Always with a
grin of ignorance
Look out!
.
.
.
Smash!
.
.
.
.
Thud!
.
.
Oh my dear!
Perhaps you should
have read me,
the sign board,
I was no menace
but was your hoard,
For this was what i bore
Drinking kills
Driving skills
Be it a bacardi blast
or a tequila shot
The sign holds still!
Let us be water
6 years ago
6 comments:
loved the start, the way u played with the rhyme...road and rode..!! :)
very interesting poem nan...!!
Beautifully written....
Its a set of verses that won't be forgotten in a hurry....
The intent is very thought provoking...
Nice job, Nan
:)
:)
Sorry i'm late.
:)
you too've got a skill... you know what? You can write on anything and everything... And that's what makes you different and good from others...
as usuall, this one was also sweet, and of course conveying its message... :)
keep writing :)
haha.. again.. too good..
I realized one can write a poem over it as well.. lolz :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
am i becoming a fan of ur poems!!!
Rahul
am i becoming a fan of ur poems!!! ?
Too early to answer :P
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