You aid my
quest to solace
by skillfully
executing that
painless slaughter
of a heart
instructed to
incessantly display
a casual smile off
a crimson crayon
Like
the intsense acidity
born of sulphate
and water
carefully revealing
the the brown ring
of ferrous ions
I stop smiling
that painful smile
and sob at ease
only to see you
disappear in a while.
Let us be water
6 years ago
4 comments:
great wording and flow of language..a n acid drop tht eats thru ur consciousness..Bravo Madam..encore!!!!
Eppudi ippadiyelllam.....
Super liricks
but ennakku onnume puriyalla
Whoa! that's quite soul piercing!
But what's with the chemistry in-between? While tending to lead a bit too astray from the original theme, it does does the job of delivering the sting.
The whole thing makes me think of asking someone to look away at knife-point, just because i can kill them at ease.
(i'll shut up now! :P)
being a chemical engineer...this poem reminded of my college days...hours spent in the lab experimenting with the acids there...
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