Wednesday, April 8, 2009


I watch you 
breaching silently
into our territory.
Annoyed, I over whelm
with relentless fury.

You defile the 
pathway into my 
prodigious kingdom.

I devise a plan
of attack at random.

My allies inside 
appreciate the 
startling wisdom

You are to be defeated 
at once for I am against
and my allies will
now storm out in the
form of a SNEEZE

I --> air trying to get inside the nostrils
You --> dust in nostrils 

N.B. When particles of dust irritate the nasal mucosa they are thrown away by convulsive expulsion of air from the lungs. 


Sanket Rathod said...

Bless You!

!nversed Poignancy! said...

Actually i can meet with this to utmost congruency..:))
Nicey Nice!

Ragpicker said...

NaN Nan Nan ::::::::: That was a magnetic depiction of something so untouched by the poetic world so far (nostrils :P)

Great Going gal ! I enjoyed it thoroughly.

Pretty Me!! said...

God bless you ;)
I just love these poems of you :)

Chronicwriter said...



great way to depict sneeze

rahul aggarwal said...

how can u think abt all this...nostrils and stuff...but whatever it is...its wow...and bless u!!!